Initial ideas for a new fiction film: Opening Sequence

1st Pitch:
My first idea as a title for an opening sequence is "Gone" this fiction film is a thriller with a twist. It's about a couple who have an argument and the girl runs off down a lane. I imagine it to start with a blank black screen with running footsteps and then you hear the girls scream and then it will switch to a scene with someone stamping on the phone. I then would like the scene to switch to the boy in a room in his house turning his head as the phone smashed like he had heard it and using the jaws effect. Then the scene would switch to him picking up the smashed phone and shouting the girls name. The camera will slowly go around the boy and increase in speed like a realisation of panick. Then he will call the police and start panicking and the script will be along the lines of "where is she? she's been taken you have to help me!" It will then cut to a scene where you see a shovel and loads of dirt which gives an idea that the girl has been murdered. Then it will cut to a scene where the girl goes to reach out at the boy and he wakes up sweating like it it was a dream. This is when the scene ends with the camera from pointing down tilting upwards to a man in a hoodie with a knife and the crushed phone in his hand down the lane where it will be all foggy the title "Gone" will appear. I plan to use an over voice of the boys voice as it will add tension aswell as with slow and scary music like a piano and violins which begins to increase in loudness getting closer to the end of the sequence. I would like to do this sequence out of school premises preferably.

This is how I imagine the ending to look with the title fading in "Gone". I will try to capture the lane in a foggy atmosphere as i think it would give an eerie look and with quite tensed music. The camera will tilt up from looking downwards to coming up as the music becomes more tensed.







2nd Pitch:
My other title sequence would be "the living graveyard" or I am thinking of calling it "Solidarity" I haven't decided which one i prefer. It begins with a couple walking through a church/graveyard to get to the park on the other side to meet with their friends however on their route they get stopped with a hand on the boys shoulder on the shoulder by the owner however he is not his usual self and as the camera moves from his feet to his face we can see that he is a zombie and tries to bite the boy however they both get away. What they don't realise is that more are surrounding them..and coming in closer.. do they fight to survive? or give in to their fears? this will be the cliffhanger at the ending of the opening sequence. I will have a script but only a little script as the actors will act like it is a normal night and eerie music. I would also like to use diegetic sounds such as breaking of branches as at one point i plan to near the beginning for the girl to hear the breaking of the branch and start to rush him out of the cemetery because she is scared. The title I plan to bring at the ending of the sequence on a blank black screen and you will hear the girls scream and the sounds of the zombie. This leaves a cliffhanger as then the audience will want to see the rest of the film.


The scene I plan to do the shooting of the pitch (if i decide to choose this one) will be in this area:



This is the exact place where i will be filming just an old painting of what it used to look like. This church/cemetery is nearby and open at all times so I could do the filming when necessary such as when I need to do filming at night it will be available. Also, the people I am thinking of using to play the zombies and the couple, live very close to the church as well so it would not be a problem for them to make their way to the church.



3rd pitch:

this is similar to how 
i would like it to finish
with the title fading in however 
it would be loads of petals
 floating down. 

My third pitch the title of the first sequence would be called "admired" a thriller about a girl who has a secret admirer however doesn't know who this admirer is which he is more of an admirer but more of a stalker and the scene will begin with her talking on the phone to her boyfriend about her parents being away for the weekend and how she can't wait to see him soon which means he is on his way over and we see a long shot of her going into the house and then a match on action of her opening the door to being in the house where we see from her point of view of the room. This then switches to a scene where you see a mans finger press play on a stereo which begins playing "every breathe you take" by the police but a remake of the version which i will record and put on a c.d. it will then go to back to the girl a medium/long shot of her and then a point of view shot of her following the rose petals and her shouting out thinking its her boyfriend. We then go back to the scene where he begins walking out of the house putting his hoodie up and shutting the door behind him. it then cuts back to the girl and her shouting out where have you gone she then finds a letter whilst following the roses saying go upstairs. she then goes upstairs and finds candles and more petals over her bed. she then goes to the window and outside the hooded man stands outside holding a sign saying "i love u" and she shouts out for her boyfriend and looks behind her then looks back out and he holds another sign up saying "he wont be coming" and she begins panicking he changes the board saying "me and u forever" she shuts the curtains and grabs her phone hides in the corner and tries to ring her boyfriend but it keeps going to voicemail she peeks out the window and the man has disappeared. she runs downstairs, locks the front door and goes to run to the back but there stands the stalker in the way where an enigma shot will be used but we never see his face which then it will cut to the title admirer with a floating petal. 


My inspirations for my films:


When creating my first intial idea the inspiration I had was from a lane that i live quite near by called "cotton lane" at night it is very eerie and throughout the lane there are odd cottages on their own and from hearing stories about girls walking down alleyways on their own and being serverly injured or mudered gave me the idea to create a film using this lane using a lot of build up of tension throughout where it will cut off not knowing whether she had been killed or not. This was an odd inspiration but the ideas I used mainly my imagination to bring it all together.

My second initial idea i used the inspiration of the zombie film "shaun of the dead" however it not being comical but the idea of everyone being dead except from this couple gave me an eerie thought. Also the image that i have put alongside my description of intial idea 2 is the actual place where i would film. also another inspiration was the music video "thriller" by michael jackson. Where all the zombies come out of the grave and follow the couple however the difference mine would be is that they wouldn't be coming out of the grave because it would be quite hard typically impossible to do so they would already be out of the grave and it would be left on a cliffhanger with the girls scream whether they made it alive out of the graveyard or not.


This is the music video "thriller" which gave me main inspiration for this idea.






My third initial idea inspiration was from a film called "prom night" which is based on a teacher who falls inlove with a student and starts stalking her and ends up becoming a muderer by killing her whole family. it inspired me to make a film about a stalker or a serial killer however i went with the idea of a stalker because it seemed to fit in with the title i had liked. Also a programme i watched called ghost whisperer had an episode about a stalker who somehow got into her house and made it into a romantic scene however not leaving her alone. These were all very good films and programmes that had given me ideas for my third idea.


This is the trailer of the film "Prom Night" which shows what the film is basically based around however if I am to go forward with this idea then i would keep the idea just in my house and not have anyone murdered as I will only use two actors (one as the girl and the other as the stalker.) as I would like it to end on a cliff hanger so noone knows what happens and wants to watch it furthermore.